Been looking through your stuffz
I like the intro, definitely a great build to something epic.
Let's see, when you do the flute or piccolo trill, make sure you do a lot of dynamic changes, (e.g. fade in/out), otherwise it kinda sounds like a telephone. I do like this though, don't get me wrong, makes it sound like some kind of spy cinematic.
The choir soundfont you used, i'm not too fond of it. It sounds too MIDIish. Which isn't bad, considering it is.
Another thing.... are you using the Faithless Pizzicato soundfont? It's not too good for live intents. I could be wrong though.
Everything else is good, I like the tempo rate and how it rolls along, I'm definitely fond of the chordial structure.
Everything else is beautiful C: