haha

This is kinda badass XD

Desperately needs a preloader though. I was confused.

umm...

Nice, my school's doing the same project, do you by chance live in vegas?

The sounds....

The sound effects ruin it completely, they're distracting and obnoxious x_x

Really great

I loved the music! the graphics were great, and it had some sort of mystical setting about it.

To be honest, unlike one of the previous reviewers, i'm sick of explosions and gunfire. There's a such thing as a simple game being good, and this portrays it perfectly.

Take harvest moon for example. when do you ever kill anything in that? And how many copies did it sell?

Anyways, brilliant game, almost has a miyazaki feel.

Also, for those with white screens, try updating your flash because i'm pretty sure this requires the latest.

Beautiful!

Hey I really like this! This is awesome! Especially at 2:00 with what you did with changing the rhythm up a bit. I could totally see somebody using this for their game!

The only suggestion is; This is WAAAAY clipped. You can tell because the waveform is breaking over the edges up above and you can hear a lot of crackling. If you still have the project file (Since, based on what I read while going through your songs, it looks like your compy decided to retire early), and if you used FL, I'd just turn down the master volume in the master filter down until the peak meter drops out of red and is at a nice white orange color. Note though, that if you use a high buffer sample count in FL, the peak won't turn red when the project starts to get hot. (At least it doesn't for me when at about 6100 samples.)

Great song though! 4.5/5 stars, 4/5 vote.

- Aeris

Hey there! Long time no chat! I saw that you're still posting music and I got excited~ I hope you don't mind the random review!

It's been a long time since I did one of these though haha (Just now coming back to NG after disappearing for a few years)

Sooo for this song;

Pros;
- The mixing is really good. You have a good handle on controlling your levels and you know how to let your melody and leads shine through (I wish I was able to do that, my leads tend to get lost in the abyss of its accompaniments haha.)
- This is definitely happy hardcore lol. It has that nauseatingly wonderful happy cotton candy sound (it's a good thing) that people who actively seek out this style look for.

Cons:
- I'd definitely stay away from copy paste (sometimes I'll challenge myself by refusing to ever use ctrl+c and ctrl+v [or cmnd if you're an Apple user.)
- Based on what I've experience with NG users, they tend to prefer to hear the beat drop within about the first 45 seconds for techno music. I'd suggest bumping that beat up a couple bars. BUT, this is your song, not NG so always keep your music true to yourself.

Suggestions (not really pro nor con):
- This suggestion could be out of the happy hardcore genre but I think a nice saw or square bass at 1:09 would really complete the total sound. Without it, it sounds a little heavy on the 7000 Hz+ spectrum and can cause a bit of that "teeth grindy" sensation. BUT, this is happy hardcore, for all I know, this genre could intentionally try to avoid basses.
- That piano arpeggiation that sounds a bit like a tonic, first inversion, root postion root position that goes on throughout the entire song. It would be awesome if that blended into the background as a harmony and a longer drawn out melody blends in on top of it.

All of this feedback though, is however, keeping in mind that you put this piece together from a tutorial. AND your without a computer to use your own. Soo a lot of this feedback may be irrelevant.

There's my 2 cents! Only -1 star because it did get a little too repetitive and sounded more like a pattern or loop. 5 Stars on the vote because this doesn't deserve a 3.34 star score and it deserves more traffic~

I'm going to dig through more of your stuff!

- Aeris